i cant help it

BECAUSE IM ASIAN, HAHA

lolllol.
just after mi obsession on dramas came haunting me again
[well,, i ASKED for it]
mi mom found out in Fb,
HAHAHH
she stalks me !!
damn,, i thot it was a rele good chance t watch dramas
[and it IS]
she ddn tell me off by th phone see,,
;D ;D

she doesnt kno that IGs are in 5 weeks? ;D ;D
*lol bad kid bad kid,

today i only have one more hour until i go for piano
damn see,,
i havn practised at all
and im on mi 3rd grade piano..
which is a whole grade jump from grade 1
hahahahahh ,
i hope today i'll live again
last time i got told off so many times

see see atm i need t do mi DT evaluation
but watf d i comment on evaluations???

What I like about my project

I personally like the images on it. Although it does not literally state that the shop sells video games, its comical style of the bag hint customers about our service. “Big Bang” is a catchy name itself. Not only it will attract young adults, the name gives everyone a sense of adrenaline. I also find the bold font appealing as it has its own red outline around it. Although the bag is filled with images, wide images and logo makes the bag seem effectively cheerful.

What I don’t like about my project

It is too full. The logo does not stand out as much as the big purple mascot as it is too small. The sides of the bag are also in grey which contrasts the tone of the front. Too much variation of colours appears to be rather confusing as it does not focus audience onto one point. Due to the excess use of colours, the cost of the ink printer may be expensive.

What I would like to change

I would try to minimize the amount of colours to decrease the complexity of the bag. The mascot should also be smaller and fainter in colour to stand the logo out instead. The logo should be bigger in size and be solid coloured. If possible, all of the images on the bag should be faint coloured except for the logo. The sides of the bag should be either in white or rainbow combination.

I wonder if this is okay,,
O: O: O:

*for the first part of the evaluation.

[mi first piece for the examination - _ -,,the teacher tells me off more thann it sounds like in the song]